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Developmental Editing

$50.00

Developmental Editing for Romance Authors – Plot, Character, & Emotional Depth

Craft a romance novel that truly resonates with readers. Jasmine BE offers expert developmental editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on structure, pacing, character motivation, and emotional arc refinement. Whether you're writing a heartfelt second-chance romance or a spicy slow burn, Jasmine helps shape your story into a cohesive, compelling experience.

What’s included:

  • Story structure and pacing feedback

  • Character development, motivation, and relationship arcs

  • Emotional arc enhancement for greater impact

  • Identification of gaps, inconsistencies, or plot issues

  • Personalized guidance to strengthen your voice and narrative flow

💸 Rate: $0.03–$0.033 USD/word (CAD available on request)
🕐 Timeline: Estimated after sample assessment and consultation

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your place in Jasmine’s editing calendar.
📌 IMPORTANT: Please fill out this form before purchasing the deposit to ensure availability and service fit.

🔄 The Process:

  1. Complete Jasmine's form and submit a short sample (prologue or scene)

  2. Receive a 3-day sample edit with comments and feedback

  3. If it's a fit, you’ll be sent a full proposal with timeline and project scope

  4. A contract will follow, along with an invoice for 50% of the total

  5. Remaining balance due upon completion of the edit

Book Now

Developmental Editing for Romance Authors – Plot, Character, & Emotional Depth

Craft a romance novel that truly resonates with readers. Jasmine BE offers expert developmental editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on structure, pacing, character motivation, and emotional arc refinement. Whether you're writing a heartfelt second-chance romance or a spicy slow burn, Jasmine helps shape your story into a cohesive, compelling experience.

What’s included:

  • Story structure and pacing feedback

  • Character development, motivation, and relationship arcs

  • Emotional arc enhancement for greater impact

  • Identification of gaps, inconsistencies, or plot issues

  • Personalized guidance to strengthen your voice and narrative flow

💸 Rate: $0.03–$0.033 USD/word (CAD available on request)
🕐 Timeline: Estimated after sample assessment and consultation

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your place in Jasmine’s editing calendar.
📌 IMPORTANT: Please fill out this form before purchasing the deposit to ensure availability and service fit.

🔄 The Process:

  1. Complete Jasmine's form and submit a short sample (prologue or scene)

  2. Receive a 3-day sample edit with comments and feedback

  3. If it's a fit, you’ll be sent a full proposal with timeline and project scope

  4. A contract will follow, along with an invoice for 50% of the total

  5. Remaining balance due upon completion of the edit

Developmental Editing for Romance Authors – Plot, Character, & Emotional Depth

Craft a romance novel that truly resonates with readers. Jasmine BE offers expert developmental editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on structure, pacing, character motivation, and emotional arc refinement. Whether you're writing a heartfelt second-chance romance or a spicy slow burn, Jasmine helps shape your story into a cohesive, compelling experience.

What’s included:

  • Story structure and pacing feedback

  • Character development, motivation, and relationship arcs

  • Emotional arc enhancement for greater impact

  • Identification of gaps, inconsistencies, or plot issues

  • Personalized guidance to strengthen your voice and narrative flow

💸 Rate: $0.03–$0.033 USD/word (CAD available on request)
🕐 Timeline: Estimated after sample assessment and consultation

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your place in Jasmine’s editing calendar.
📌 IMPORTANT: Please fill out this form before purchasing the deposit to ensure availability and service fit.

🔄 The Process:

  1. Complete Jasmine's form and submit a short sample (prologue or scene)

  2. Receive a 3-day sample edit with comments and feedback

  3. If it's a fit, you’ll be sent a full proposal with timeline and project scope

  4. A contract will follow, along with an invoice for 50% of the total

  5. Remaining balance due upon completion of the edit

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