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Work with Jasmine BE

The Grammar Gremlin

I love love love reading. I can usually read a book in a day or so if it’s just for fun. In the past few years, I’ve decided to turn this hyperfocus toward helping authors become confident and proud of their work. I grew up in the USA, but I’m Canadian and currently live in Ontario. I have also had the privilege to live in Scotland for a few years. So, I am more comfortable with the different nuances between the different versions of English. I enjoy reading Romance and Fantasy novels that tend to have dark (or pitch-black) themes, high levels of spice, and usually “why choose/RH”. I offer developmental/structural and line/stylistic editing. My favourite thing about being an editor is seeing the transformation of the authors and their self-confidence. I know that sounds cliche, but it’s true.

Work With Me

What I do.

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    Developmental Editing

    Take your romance novel to the next level with expert developmental editing tailored for self-published and indie authors. At Hawthorn & Aster, we help you refine your story structure, deepen character development, and enhance emotional arcs to create a captivating reading experience. Whether you're crafting a swoon-worthy happily-ever-after or a heart-wrenching second-chance romance, we ensure your manuscript is built to resonate with readers.

    Services include:

    - Strengthening plot structure and pacing.
    - Enhancing character depth, motivation, and relationships.
    - Refining emotional arcs for maximum reader impact.
    - Identifying and resolving
    - inconsistencies or gaps in your story.
    - Personalized feedback to shape your unique voice and vision.

    $0.03-0.033/word (USD — CAD on request)

    Let us help you transform your draft into an unforgettable romance novel that keeps readers hooked until the last page. Schedule a consultation today to bring your story to life!

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    Line Editing

    Refine your romance novel with professional line editing tailored for self-published and indie authors. At Hawthorn & Aster, we focus on the details that make your writing shine—ensuring clarity, consistency, and emotional impact in every line. Whether it’s a spicy enemies-to-lovers tale or a heartfelt second-chance romance, we enhance your storytelling while preserving your unique voice.

    Services include:

    - Polishing sentence structure for readability and flow.
    - Enhancing tone, style, and emotional resonance.
    - Eliminating repetitive phrasing and awkward wording.
    - Ensuring consistency in language and voice.
    - Strengthening dialogue and narrative impact.

    $0.025-0.028/word (USD — CAD on request)

    Transform your manuscript into a page-turner that captures hearts. Book a consultation today and let us help you craft a romance novel readers can’t put down!

  • I enjoy reading Romance and Fantasy novels that tend to have dark (or pitch-black) themes, high levels of spice, and usually “why choose/RH.”

  • Please complete the following form. I will reach out to you and ask you to fill out a form where you’ll send me the prologue (or any part of your book), so I can assess if I am the right editor for you. We will schedule a sample edit and an after-assessment call if we're a good fit.

    It takes 3 days for me to complete a sample edit, which will include comments and feedback.

    From there, you’ll send me your full manuscript, and a proposal will be sent with the estimated project length and agreed-upon deadline.

    From there, you will be sent a contract and an invoice for half the total fee (the other half due upon completion).

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