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Line Editing

$50.00

Line Editing for Romance Authors – Sentence-Level Polish with Emotional Precision

Give your manuscript the final layer of polish it deserves. Jasmine BE provides professional line editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on clarity, flow, voice, and emotional resonance—without losing the heart of your story.

From spicy banter to tearjerking reunions, Jasmine helps ensure every line sings, every scene connects, and every paragraph moves your reader.

What’s included:

  • Sentence-level editing for tone, voice, and readability

  • Reduction of repetitive phrasing and awkward constructions

  • Strengthened emotional cues and narrative impact

  • Dialogue smoothing and style refinement

  • Consistency checks for voice and flow

💸 Rates: $0.025–$0.028 USD/word
(CAD quotes available on request)

🔄 The Process:

  1. PLEASE FIRST BE SURE TO Fill out the intake form on Jasmine’s editing page

  2. Submit a sample (prologue or scene) for a free editorial review

  3. Receive a 3-day turnaround sample edit with notes + feedback

  4. If it’s a fit, Jasmine will send a project proposal, contract, and estimated turnaround

  5. Full invoice split: 50% at booking, 50% on delivery

This service is perfect for authors ready to refine tone, emotional resonance, and scene-level flow before final proofing.

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your spot. Full pricing is confirmed after sample edit and manuscript review.

Book Now

Line Editing for Romance Authors – Sentence-Level Polish with Emotional Precision

Give your manuscript the final layer of polish it deserves. Jasmine BE provides professional line editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on clarity, flow, voice, and emotional resonance—without losing the heart of your story.

From spicy banter to tearjerking reunions, Jasmine helps ensure every line sings, every scene connects, and every paragraph moves your reader.

What’s included:

  • Sentence-level editing for tone, voice, and readability

  • Reduction of repetitive phrasing and awkward constructions

  • Strengthened emotional cues and narrative impact

  • Dialogue smoothing and style refinement

  • Consistency checks for voice and flow

💸 Rates: $0.025–$0.028 USD/word
(CAD quotes available on request)

🔄 The Process:

  1. PLEASE FIRST BE SURE TO Fill out the intake form on Jasmine’s editing page

  2. Submit a sample (prologue or scene) for a free editorial review

  3. Receive a 3-day turnaround sample edit with notes + feedback

  4. If it’s a fit, Jasmine will send a project proposal, contract, and estimated turnaround

  5. Full invoice split: 50% at booking, 50% on delivery

This service is perfect for authors ready to refine tone, emotional resonance, and scene-level flow before final proofing.

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your spot. Full pricing is confirmed after sample edit and manuscript review.

Line Editing for Romance Authors – Sentence-Level Polish with Emotional Precision

Give your manuscript the final layer of polish it deserves. Jasmine BE provides professional line editing for indie and self-published romance authors, focusing on clarity, flow, voice, and emotional resonance—without losing the heart of your story.

From spicy banter to tearjerking reunions, Jasmine helps ensure every line sings, every scene connects, and every paragraph moves your reader.

What’s included:

  • Sentence-level editing for tone, voice, and readability

  • Reduction of repetitive phrasing and awkward constructions

  • Strengthened emotional cues and narrative impact

  • Dialogue smoothing and style refinement

  • Consistency checks for voice and flow

💸 Rates: $0.025–$0.028 USD/word
(CAD quotes available on request)

🔄 The Process:

  1. PLEASE FIRST BE SURE TO Fill out the intake form on Jasmine’s editing page

  2. Submit a sample (prologue or scene) for a free editorial review

  3. Receive a 3-day turnaround sample edit with notes + feedback

  4. If it’s a fit, Jasmine will send a project proposal, contract, and estimated turnaround

  5. Full invoice split: 50% at booking, 50% on delivery

This service is perfect for authors ready to refine tone, emotional resonance, and scene-level flow before final proofing.

🧾 This $50 listing is a non-refundable deposit to reserve your spot. Full pricing is confirmed after sample edit and manuscript review.

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